Fissure

[Evil Eye]

holding my breath for next chapter

[Doc 42]

Considering I havn't posted in a long while, I've decided to hit you with a double whammy today

Chapters 2&3 up

Please enjoy.

[TyrannoTitan]

Hell yes. Citizens of Bob are weird, although, they have their own Men in Black : D

Can't wait for more.

[C S]

They know what elephant turds smell like

I expect to see elephants-I DEMAND DUMBO

.....Funny chapters....

[Doc 42]

Few months later, chapter 4 posted.
This will probably be the last chapter set completely on Bob. Enjoy.

[C S]

Muka is pwnage..dont run with scissors...F*CKING AWESOME

Nice chapter, I had a nice laugh

[TyrannoTitan]

Must...obey...pineapple...

Absolutely hilarious chapter.

[Giratina93]

... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!

so funny! 10/10

[The Kingpin]

this was literary gold. i've been laughing since Muka turned up. of all the things it could possibly be, a monkey, a random fat cat, a skinney old man that's 3 feet tall.......a pineapple as the least expected...once again, you outdo yourself doc. brilliant chapter



waiting for the next one...

[Doc 42]

The Curse of Night
It’s cold. Very cold.
Davan hated cold weather.
It’s late. They’re late. Everything is late.
Davan always got scared when they were late.

It’s a place. A familiar one. A bad place.
Davan really hated that place.
This place hurts. Things hurt. They hurt.
They always hurt him. But they weren’t the ones who were late.

It’s getting dark. So dark
Davan liked the night.
There were things in the dark
Davan did not like the things in the night

It’s very quiet.
Davan was alone, the rest were gone.
It’s not usually quiet
It was this time, because they were late.

There was a noise in the dark
Davan looked around, hoping to see it.
It was the crunching of gravel. Tyres
They drove a car with big tyres. Wheels.

It’s late. They’re late- IT is late
Davan didn’t like when they were late, but liked the treats he got to make up for it.

They were there, but it was here
They didn’t get here in time.

IT IS HERE
It got here first.
[I]What did IT want?
It wanted Davan
The dark was no more. There was light.
Davan was scared of the light.

There was noise. There was pain, the flash of light, the flash of death. It burned. Everything burned.
Davan asked IT why it was here
I’m here to kill you. Davan.
And then the flash tore through his chest like a blazing sword.

[C S]

And now we step into a realm

a realm called "Mindfuck"

[Galaxia]

And now we step into a realm

a realm called "Mindfuck"

And terrible realm to be in at that

This looks good Doc 42 I'm going to bookmark it straight away

[Doc 42]

Its been a while, but I start college tomorrow, and quite frankly, I feel like I have to finish this fic at some point. I owe it to the site. So here goes.

The curse of night and chapter six up. Goodbye bob.

[Doc 42]

re-downloading my word editing software, once it's back, I'll get to work on the next chapter, should be up by Monday