RPing Eduction and Sparring

[Giratina93]

Metroid Prime raised up a claw, the flamnig arrow bounced off the claw, 3 missles fire, though instead hitting a Stallactite on the ceiling, the stallagtite cracks, then plummets toward the ground, ready to impale Valroz...

[dinoman666]

Valroz extended a palm up, sending a powerful gout of fire slamming into the stalactite, the intense heat shattering it and melting the fragments into nothing. Snarling at Metroid Prime, the Demon creates a fireball and launches it at Prime's face, followed by several more...

[Giratina93]

MP stumbles back from the force of the fireballs, the creature lunges forward, brnging it's claws down upon Valroz, MP begisn to swipw away furiously at the demon...

[dinoman666]

Valroz caught two of Metroid Prime's claws as they swung down at him, bracing his knees to stop the impact from crushing him. Growling angrily, he sprayed flame from his mouth at Prime's face, trying to make him back off...

[Giratina93]

The magma burning the creature, MP stumbled back, 7 missles fired from MP's back and impacted Valroz, the mutated Metroid let loose a wave of flames from it's mouth at the demon...

[dinoman666]

The missiles knocked Valroz back, but the flames did just the opposite. Absorbing the fire to rejuvenate himself, Valroz allowed himself a vicious chuckle, before lunging forward, a spear made of fire forming in his hand, stabbing forward at Metroid Prime's face...

[Giratina93]

MP roars in pain and agony as the fire spear penetrates MP's head armor, the spear punctures through the brain, the creutre lets out one final roar of pain before it slumps to the ground, dead...

[dinoman666]

Valroz's spear disappeared into nothingness, and the Demon backed away from Metroid Prime's corpse, breathing heavily from exertion. He turned and looked around to try and find a way out of the cavern and back to his home in the Wastelands...

[Iceking]

Good battle. The main mistake you made, Gira, was that you didn't use MP's claws for that much defense, especially when it came to the final hit. You could have had MP use one of his claws as a shield and while the spear might have pierced his claw, it could have also protected his head from fatal damage.

[C S]

My opinion? Horrible match up. A Metroid vs a DEMON? Really one sided

[Iceking]

Razortail vs Ridley

Location:Paris

Razortail hissed at the Purley organic dragon before him that had only momments ago, been causing destroying buildings of the city. Deciding to find out what ranged attacks Ridley had, if any, he launched a single missle at the space dragon...

[Giratina93]

Ridley narrowed his eyes and let out a single fireball at the missle, the fireball obliterated the missle and kept gonig right at Razortail...

[Iceking]

Razortail lept to the right, the fireball flying past him. Now knowing that this enemy was resistent to heat, he knew that incendiary missles would be of little use. Rather than launching another missle, Razortail fired a group of cluster bombs from his back at Ridley...

[Doc 42]

DM: Big improvement.

Gira: Your turn.

MP charged at Valroz with surprisnig speed, the creature delivereda vicious strike with one of it's claws at Valroz, slicing the demon across the chest, though it didn't penetrate all that deeply...*

If I swear to god, if I see another post like this by anyone in this topic I'm going to explode. All Valroz needed to do to dodge was hop back a step, and that claw would have missed.

Phazon began to drip from the wound and spilled onto Valroz, the dangerous fluid began to seep into the demon's blood system, actnig as a deadly poison

Semantics: In order to get into his blood system it would need to be injected. poison won't flow into an open wound, the pressure of the blood would keep it out. You'd need to force it in, or dunk a seriously gaping wound into it.

MP, thinknig that Valroz was chargeing him, backed up instinctivly, Valroz's swipe having missed as a result, the mutated Metroid brings down it's front claws onto Valrog, causnig numerous cuts on the demon's body, MP then fires off a third volley of missles at point-blank rage...*

This is a huge no no. You have to understand the time scale of the posts.


MP fired his beam, and as he did so, Valroz dodged it by diving under it and stabbing MP's leg

Then you said that MP saw the move coming, and jumped back as he thought Valroz was going to charge.

The problem is that your post before and after DM's squash in on each other. As Dm's post *happened* near the end of your first post, in order to react to it, you had to back on your old post. Essentially Mp did two different things at the same time. This is the first time I've seen this happening but it leads to a bigger problem, people dodging first, thinking second. If your going to evade an attack, make sure that it sounds right. Picture the scene in your head, make sure you know the facts. Winning a fight will all be for nothing if it was a bad one. There will be no respect attached to it. Think about the fight first, then think about wanting to win it.

now that thats done with, Gira, Ik pretty much covered it well. You didn't think of your defense enough. It was too late to block Valroz's spear by the time he stabbed, but you might have been able to ward it off by preparing for such an attack before hand. Also, your over use of missiles was a mistake. It was an annoying attack and you spammed it. While that seems like a good way to antagonise your opponent, an annoyed opponent is much more likely to stab you where you do not want to be stabbed, and will counter with the intent of annoying you equally.

DM: Very good over all, but could be improved with more percision attacks. attacking in general is good for wearing an opponent down and discerning their weaknesses, but in order to do real damage you have to target your shots. Firing an arrow into MP does some damage, but it is mostly 'in name only.' He is damaged but he can still fight just as well as he could, with the arrow having little lasting effect. However, an arrow aimed into his leg, or even more specifically, the already damaged joint, would have a chance at crippling the whole limb. It's very blockable, Gira could have MP move the leg so it strikes a different part, but an arrow is a very fast attack and so a full dodge is out of the question, meaning a counter attack is unlikely. He can't block the arrow and then lash out quickly, by the time it's blocked, Valroz would be ready to defend. as the attack is so fast, his only way of landing a counter shot would be to ignore the pain of the attack and charge (Which mighten even land, depending on their range) but if the attack is targeted towards the joint like that, he can't afford to do that, getting in an extra attack isn't worth having his leg crippled so you can pin him down that way.

In an intense frantic battle, it will be precision attacks that win the day.

Also, there were a few dirty tricks you could have used but didn't. That spear stab into MP's face at the end was a good move, but it was blockable. Mp might have been able to block it with his claws, however, if you had valroz chuck a blast of flame into his face before the attack to distract, he wouldn't know it was coming and would be helpless to stop it.

[Giratina93]

( I guess I need alot of improvment in time-lapse stuff...)

Ridley dove to the side, most fo the bombs missed, but a few scored home and caused moderate pain to the space dragon. gettnig back onto his feet, Ridley charged at the creature, swinging his tail at the beast...

[Iceking]

Razortail ducked his head low enough to protect it from Ridley's tail swing, although he was still struck at his shoulder blades, the spear tipped tail leaving a cut in the scales. With a snarl, Razortail lunged at the space dragon's left front limb, jaws open...

[Giratina93]

Ridley tried to move his arm out of the way of the bite, but his hand got caught in the monster's jaws. Trying desperatly to free his hadn, Ridley attempted to slash Razortail across the face with his free hand...

[Iceking]

Upon seeing Ridley move his free hand, Razortail opened his jaws to release his grip, although he didn't have enough time to move his head out of the way of the slash. Luckily, the attack didn't hit either of his eyes, which he was the most concerned about. The GDF unit then swung his spiked tail into his foe's chest, the force of the blow knocking the space dragon rolling...

[Giratina93]

Ridley stumbled back onto feet, the space dragon grasped hsi chest in pain, blood began to drip onto his hand. Rage now fillnig the dragon's mind, RIdley let loose a stream of flames at Razortail...

[Iceking]

Leaping to the left side of the fire stream, Razortail fired an explosive shell from the railgun on his head into Ridley's side. He had briefly seen anger in the eyes of his foe before avoiding the fire stream, which meant it was more likely to make mistakes that would work to it's disadvantage...