Isla Cruces: Jurassic Island

[Doc 42]

ooooooooooooffffffff tooooooooooopiiiiiiiiiiiic

Go make a different topic and debate about it there, also, state where you are getting your info from, other wise this will turn into a "yes it is" "no it isnt" debate.

and take your time with the chapter

[Evil Eye]

o got it. anyway heres next ch

[Evil Eye]

like i said this chapter is a build up, so just to keep the suspense (and u guys interested), part of the next chapter:

A calculating eye glanced down from its high above watching position as the anxious troodons crowded around a specific patch of ground, slightly off color from the rest of it. The breeze didn’t make it move as it did other patches of grass either. The troodons were having no success infiltrating what they knew was a small passageway to a room for spying on them. They tried at first pushing it with their snouts, which were far too weak to do anything. Soon after, they progressed to pulling it up with their hands, which, at the beginning, seemed to be doing something, but turned out just as useless as the former, as their sharp claws eventually ripped through the pliable material.
Looking back to his position, he saw a small Jeep in the distance following a path toward their prison.

[Evil Eye]

k here it is ch 4 enjoy

[Doc 42]

Veeeeeeeery nice chapter. Good bit of fighting put in there
It was generally good, nice character development as well.

[Evil Eye]

really it was that good? thx a lot!

[Evil Eye]

next chapter is up

[Doc 42]

Smart raptors.... But, they dont have guns