RPing Eduction and Sparring

[Iceking]

Seeing his foe's exposed chest, Balkzardan quickly darted forward, swinging his tusks at the charred flesh...

[Giratina93]

Meta-Ridley roared in pain as the tusks gouged through his flesh, blood spilled all over the area. Mustering up what strength he could, the cyborg launched a single fireball at Balkzardan at point-blank range...

[Iceking]

Balkzardan snarled angrily as the fireball burned the area where his neck ended and his main body began. Ignoring the pain, He swung his tail at Meta Ridley's right front paw, aiming to trip the dragon...

[Giratina93]

Meta-Ridley, already being on his ihind legs, fell over as the tail swiped him off his hnd legs, the Space Dragon rolled back onto his feet, waitingto se what his foe would do next...

[Iceking]

Suprised that his foe hadn't tried to attack him while getting up, Balkzardan suddenly ran forward, lunging at the left front foot of Meta Ridley with his jaws open...

[Giratina93]

Thinking fst, Meta-Ridley slashed at Balkzardan, throwing the lunging creature off balance, and onto it's side, Meta-Ridley swiftly leaped onto Balkzardan's side, his talons ripping through it's flesh...

[Iceking]

Snarling angrily, Balkzardan sent electric shocks across his body again, forcing the dragon to stop slashing him. As he did this, his body began glowing before a flash of light was produced, the brightness enough to blind Meta Ridley temporarily...

[Giratina93]

Meta-Ridley closed his eyes, the space dragon still able to know where Balkzardan was via heat sensers on his snout, Meta-Ridley stepped off the electrical monster, only for three missles to fire from his back at Balkzardan's head...

[Iceking]

Unleashing an electrical beam, Balkzardan swept it into the three missles, detonating them safley away from his head. Getting back to his feet and leaping back, he fired yet another beam at Meta Ridley's head. He noticed that the dragon's eyes were closed, yet it still seemed to know where he was, which no doubt meant that it had special sensors meant to detect enemies even if it was blinded...

[Giratina93]

Hearing the sound of Balkzardan firing the beam, Meta-Ridley instinctly ducked down, the beam zoomed past his head by mear feet, the space dragon turned, slamming his tail into the creature, knocking it back over. Eyes now open, Meta-Ridley turned to face Balkzardan, the cyborg sent his tail right at the monster, aiming to pirce it through the head once and for all...

[Iceking]

Quickly rolling to the side even though he was knocked down, Balkzardan got back to his feet. Hissing angrily, he then lunged forward, clamping his jaws onto Meta Ridley's neck while sending electrical shocks across his body so that he couldn't be attacked without the dragon being affected...

[Giratina93]

Meta-RIdley roared in pain as the combined shocks and bite proved too much. A mixture of blood and oil began to foam at the cyborg's mouth, before all life was zapped from him, the corpse of Meta-Ridley hung there, limp, being held by the jaws of Balkzardan...

[Iceking]

Balkzardan let go of the neck of Meta Ridley and stopped the shocks occuring across his body when he saw the dragon go limp. He let out a roar of triumph, then growled:"May this serve as a warning to the masters of this cyborg." With this, he resumed walking through the abanodoned city...

A good fight, Gira. However, you weren't aggressive enough in my opninion. Another mistake you made was you kept staying in close range combat. Meta Ridley could have remained at a distance and used his ranged attacks to wear down Balkzardan before he moved into melee combat.

[Giratina93]

Yea, butt then, it would have simply have beenbeam spamming, fireball spamming, and mssle spamming to the max. So I decided to mix things up abit...

Now... to wait for either KP, TT, or Doc to come and rate the fight...

[Iceking]

You could have also had Meta Ridley come in for only brief periods for a melee attack, then retreated back to a distance to keep out of melee range.

[C S]

Ridley is a hit and run character. You cant have him go "He snarled in rage and did a rush combo" because your just asking for the enemy to blow him backwards mid attack.

[TyrannoTitan]

(Note: If you guys keep churning out sparing fights in this amount, don't expect an admin review for every one >.<)

First, scaling things just takes away the advantage and disadvantage of size. So if you want to make a GEW sized meta ridley, make a temp profile, post it here, and ta da, its fine.

Second, IK, the main problem I had with your posts was mostly in description. You use the word "beam" alot, which has been used A LOT in GEW, and has lost all meaning. Describing it more would just improve the quality of the posts.

Gira, I agree with IK's statement to be honest. You weren't nearly aggressive enough. You also need to think about coming up with an original character. Taking a character from the media only limits the possibilities. Ridley and Meta-Ridley are almost exactly the same. You need to experiment with different characters, and thus different fighting styles, and find what you like best.

[C S]

MegaMouth VS Razortail (Battle For San Diego)
Location: San Diego

Buildings leading from the city's edge into it heart were missing chunks of concrete. Some were leveled completely as the dark red titan made his way through the place. San Diego was destroyed in the past, but some of the city still served refuge to the human race. A fact MegaMouth didnt care about. He only cared about the mechanical beast infront of him leaving...

[Iceking]

Razortail hissed at the monster in front of him. He had been bored for the last few days with nothing to fight and now, he had been ordered to stop this creature. Intent on learning of it's range capabilities, he fired a single missle at the hunched over creature...

[C S]

A ripple of heat escaped the monster's maw as his lips curled, revealing more of his ragged teeth. MegaMouth swung his head as the missiles neared, flames pouring out of his mouth, the intense heat predetonating the weapons. The fire ball consumed the monster, hiding him in the bright fires. Sudenly, his form rocketed out of the blaze, charging at Razortail, ready to send his mass into the cyborg at full speed...