C S wrote:Oi m8, your character is currently involved in a scene with Saurus. You can't just hopscotch from there without working something out with him.
~A bit of a late addition here~
A piece of advice is, don't be so be caught up on "big" things for your character. That isn't to say you can't strive for an awesome and memorable story, but you shouldn't have your starting goal be, "become super famous across the whole RPG". Characters need substance, that's what makes them characters. Something made just to secure some title or to make some claim to fame will come across as very transparent and in so being, disregarded rather than respected.
In the case of your character, aside from the refinement that the profile needs in terms of sentence structure and grammar, a grave mistake to make is having him be the best of his kind. KP brought this up with another member before. It doesn't add to his character at all and, in fact, detracts from his story, as it exists in a vacuum. He hasn't proven himself in the realm of the RPG at large and implying greatness isn't quite nearly the same as expressing it.
I think it's worth noting that greatness doesn't make great characters, necessarily. Flaws are what make characters interesting, and real. I wish I'd learned this sooner.
DM and LCM, if you guys are waking Zazikel up, I'd love to get in on it somehow. I've been wanting to rejoin FRPG, so it'd be a great segue for my characters as well.